Reflections.

Reflecting on my work.

Overall my design are original in my mind. My thought process was pre extreme, with the amount of detail to each design. Im happy with my sketching and illustration skills, especially with the storyboard. Now reflection on each individual poster.

Poster One;

Reflection of geometric shapes. The through process and explanation of why I specifically did that is pre intense if you've been told, however "if you've been told", I feel randoms would not get the idea or even lecturers would get it I didn't explain my reasoning, which is disappointing, I should have made it more simplistic and put myself in the shoes of the people overviewing my work.

Poster Two;

Reflection is that the concept is decent and gets the message across how ever little things such as puddles on the ground is really bad I did my best to create some, also the character realism, so maybe next time adding a eyes, mouth... the essentials, and more precise with the details like shadowing, and water hitting the umbrella, the character having water drops on his clothes. Being able to create, him looking down with a sad face into his reflection would have been extremely cool but I'm limited to my capabilities on illustrator. Also text I didn't give enough thought on where and why, also wasn't certain about the distancing of the word 'Aeon' I had a meaning behind it but was it the best course of action?

Poster Three;

Reflection on my storyboard. The illustration is pre good, and the sketches that lead unto that is the best I could do, also the camera angles and build up of story. However the story line in general could be improved maybe I should have taken a different route, and also the way in which you read it I definitely should have changed it from top to bottom back to top for left to right to left.

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